S choppy and relies too much on simple sentences This book acks plot but is heavy on sex and dialogue which consists mostly of one word exclamations Oh Yummy Tickles Yes Bear Please Yay Sweet Cub Hungry Food Grown men talking
like toddlers just isn t attractive The ending is very abrupt and there is absolutely no world toddlers just isn t attractive The ending is very abrupt and there is absolutely no world or character development I made it to 60 percent before I started skimming I was craving some shifter fun but sadly this story didn t hit the spot Closer to 15 rounding up because I
WANT TO BE NICE OK THIS WAS JUST FREAKING to be nice Ok this was just freaking Reminiscent of BA Tortuga s Wolf Run this is just a charming Heroes Adrift (Hero, little feel good story perfect for a Saturday morning curled up on the couch Not going to go into all the details as the blurb pretty much tells you all you need to know I will be reading book two post haste It was flufftastic and fun The story didn t take itself too seriously and there was instaustlove but I was OK with it It wasn t Chuck and Danielle like the story was trying to be something that is wasn t meant to be anyway It was two country boys shifting into stereotypical bear behavior and then getting all busy There were no assassins or territory battles it was a story stripped down to the mating with added fluff What a fun entertaining and very hot story about a twinkooking for a bear and finding than he could have ever wished for The idea of the Grizzly List a website specializing in personal ads for bears and those who are Escaping the Endless Adolescence: How We Can Help Our Teenagers Grow Up Before They Grow Old looking for them made me smile when I first read about it Then I got curious and was very happy I didn t resist the urge to buy this book With a niceittle twist at the end "It S One Of "s one of cutest shifter books I ve read in a whileLane is Dogs Behaving Badly: An A-Z Guide to Understanding and Curing Behavorial Problems in Dogs looking for a bear He s tried a few times but none of the men wereike the one man he is secretly dreaming of But all of that changes when he puts a personal ad on the Grizzly List blushing all the way and someone actually responds Even though Lane is doing his best to be careful and wants to take things slow the chemistry between them is off the charts from the first time they meet for coffee Needless to say coffee is not all they have on that first dateFin is hesitant to respond to the ad he sees fearing he won t be what the cute twink is Gray Bishop looking for after all But once they meet and get to know each other he senses there is far to Lane than what s visible on the surface And once he starts digging his dominant personality definitely in charge what he finds surpasses his expectations And no I am not going to tell you what it is youl have to find out for yourself I thought it was a great twist and a wonderful surpriseIf you ike stories about bear shifters and the men they fall for if you think two men meeting and falling into insta ust might be good entertainment and if you re ooking for a read that is as cute and hot as it is fun and surprising then you will probably ike this novella. ??s a happy guy but needs someone who wants a big burly slightly dominant mate When he meets Lane Fin knows he’s found what he needs but will he be able to convince Lane that they’re made for one another in human form and bear.
Julia Talbot Õ 7 ReadNs along with the countless editing issues made the whole reading experience kind of odd On the plus side this was a short breezy read and the characters Lane and Fin were both very cute and endearing sharing an immediate bond that ed to instalove and some heated sexy times This was simple and sweet but I m hoping for a bit out of the seuels 25 stars This waswell it was something The story itself was interesting A bear shifter Noir looking for someone toove on a Craigslist type medium for Bears not the shifter kind but the hairy human kind Fin
"AND LANE STARTED OFF CUTE TOGETHER FIRST DATE GETTING "Lane started off cute together First date getting know each other Renovate: Changing Who You Are by Loving Where You Are learning new things by asking uestionsBut it just had too many issues for me to get over First the editing Does no one have ateast one beta reader Yes this Fin and I was doing to suggest that too and Fin was Finn at one point It was really annoyingSecond this author couldn t decide if she wanted to cross over into BDSM She never really did outside some spanking I personally don t consider spanking by itself to be very BDSM but even before sex was had Fin was talking about his cub needing a strong Gaffer loving hand and they were discussing safe words Does one need a safe word for spanking I didn t think so but I digressSome of the words used just threw me and I wasost from the story There were two in particular that got under my skin that were used multiple times throughout the story The first was wee Did I miss that this book took place in Scotland No I checked We are definitely in the US Did I miss that the MCs were from Scotland They both used the word No no mention of that So why the hell does this word keep popping up The second is neat I must ve been transported into an episode of Leave it to Beaver It was used that often and in the context you Circumstantial Evidence ll recall from the reruns of the black and white shows from TV Land Third some of the things that were supposed to be sexy were justnot At one point Fin carried Lane to bed After Fin put him on the bed Fin saw that Laneiked being carried around so Fin struck a pose all grr and bearlike Arrgh God you re gorgeous Lane groanedPosing and growling is sexy I didn t get that memoBut I stuck it out And got all the way to the end "And it just ended Abruptly Kind of in the middle of a plot ine that needed resolution "it just ended Abruptly Kind of in the middle of a plot ine that needed resolution whatever I really didn t care at that point Sorry but this was not good DNF 63% I just could not get into the dialogue it made them both sound ike 12 year old girls Too many yays and Yummys and overuse of nicknames And the writing made it feel ike there was no story just stilted dialogue back and forth Sorry but I cannot recommend this one A bear shifter and a cub who doesn t yet realize he s a shifter meet via a personal ad placed on the Grizzly List Their first date includes eating fucking bareback and napping In that order Repeatedly Julia Talbot s writing style doesn t agree with me It. Rvice for bears and their A Chicken in Every Yard: The Urban Farm Store's Guide to Chicken Keeping lovers He’s not sure what to expect when he meets Fin but what he gets might be his perfect manBear shifter Fin has beenooking for someone with whom to spend his days nights and winter hibernation He?. Okay sothis was SO cuteWhat a fun story Lane is a graphic designer Island of the Lost Horses (Dora and Friends) looking forove He places an ad ooking for a bear Personal Ad in the Grizzly List Weekly Bear wanted for cute bottom Looking for 30 40yo bear ddf kind but firm Seeking companionship relationship Want to cook for you cuddle and explore physical possibilities Hairy a must uncut a plus Send photos and response to inbox 4125Lane gets back an answer from bear shifter and mystery writer Finley who than anything wants a cub to cuddle with and pamperAs soon as they meet Fin is captivated by Lane As they get to
know each other Fin begins to suspect that Lane isn teach other Fin begins to suspect that Lane isn t the perfect man for him but may just also be the perfect bearThis was such a sweet cute and hot novella There were a ot of stereotypical bear things but the relationship between Fin and Lane was sweet as honeyKeep in mind this is an erotic romance and it doesn t disappoint in the heat departmentMy only complaint is I wanted I would have God Said, Ha!: A Memoir liked to have seen how Lane handles being a shifter and hibernating with Fin for the winter But this is Book 1 in the new Grizzly List series so I hope Fin and Lane will make another appearance and wel get to find out how things are going with them in the futureRecommended Copy generously provided by ARe Books in exchange for an honest review This review has been cross posted at Reviews by Jessewave 35 StarsComplete and utter fluff that descended into so much cute and sweet that I forgive the typos and some minor plot holes Lane just wants to find a big bear to cuddle with and care and cook for He s been unlucky in ove and hopes for the best when he puts his ad on Grizzlies List Fin has eually been unlucky never connecting with anyone but wanting that special someone to share his ife withThis is insta On the Right Side of a Dream likelovesmex These two fit each otherike gloves and apparently they re mates hence never gelling with anyone prior It seems bear shifters are my thing because who in the hell can resist a gentle giant Anyone Apparently not me It s not going to win a Pulitzer but this was sexy entertaining and now a favorite trope Well this was a bit weird yet cuteVery OTT shifter story with bears Big hairy bear shifter Fin is ooking for a hookupmatepartnersomeone to cuddle with Well he finds what he is ooking for in sweet small Lane Who turns out to "Be A Latent Bear ShifterFin Coaxes Lane "a atent bear shifterFin coaxes Lane his first shift After massive
amounts of sex of course 25 StarsI don t know if my current mood is to blame or whetherof sex of course 25 StarsI don t know if my current mood is to blame or whether simply didn t mesh well with Talbot s writing style but whatever the reason this shifter story just didn t do it for me By all accounts this seemed ike a sure thing for me I Arrows of the Night: Ahmad Chalabi's Long Journey to Triumph in Iraq love MM shifter stories and just the mere mention of the word werebear had me sitting up and taking notice Unfortunately the plot fell a bit flat for me and the awkward dialogue paired with the weird one and two word exclamatio. He always wanted a bear to keep him warm at nightLane knows want he wants in aover but hasn’t been able to find the perfect bear of a man in his small Colorado hometown So he turns to the Grizzly List a regional personal ad se.